[e] (0) Make this sentence about <embed> less convoluted.

Fixing https://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=25144 Affected topics: HTML git-svn-id: http://svn.whatwg.org/webapps@8602 340c8d12-0b0e-0410-8428-c7bf67bfef74
whatwg · May 3, 2014 · 7978bc1 · 7978bc1
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@@ -290,7 +290,7 @@
   </script><body onload=init()>
   <header class="head with-buttons" id=head><p><a href=//www.whatwg.org/ class=logo><img width=101 src=/images/logo alt=WHATWG height=101></a></p>
    <hgroup><h1 class=allcaps>HTML</h1>
-    <h2 class="no-num no-toc">Living Standard &mdash; Last Updated 2 May 2014</h2>
+    <h2 class="no-num no-toc">Living Standard &mdash; Last Updated 3 May 2014</h2>
    </hgroup><div>
     <div>
      <a href=//whatwg.org/html><span><strong>Multipage Version</strong> <code>whatwg.org/html</code></span></a>
@@ -23542,14 +23542,18 @@ <h4 id=the-embed-element><span class=secno>4.7.3 </span>The <dfn><code>embed</co
 
   <div class=impl>
 
-  <p>When the element is created with neither a <code title=attr-embed-src><a href=#attr-embed-src>src</a></code> attribute
-  nor a <code title=attr-embed-type><a href=#attr-embed-type>type</a></code> attribute, and when attributes are removed such
-  that neither attribute is present on the element anymore, and when the element has a <a href=#media-element>media
-  element</a> ancestor, and when the element has an ancestor <code><a href=#the-object-element>object</a></code> element that is
-  <em>not</em> showing its <a href=#fallback-content>fallback content</a>, any <a href=#plugin>plugin</a> instantiated for
-  the element must be removed, and the <code><a href=#the-embed-element>embed</a></code> element then represents nothing.</p>
+  <p>While any of the following conditions are occurring, any <a href=#plugin>plugin</a> instantiated for
+  the element must be removed, and the <code><a href=#the-embed-element>embed</a></code> element <a href=#represents>represents</a>
+  nothing:</p>
 
-  <p>An <code><a href=#the-embed-element>embed</a></code> element is said to be <dfn id=concept-embed-active title=concept-embed-active>potentially
+  <ul class=brief><li><p>The element has neither a <code title=attr-embed-src><a href=#attr-embed-src>src</a></code> attribute nor a <code title=attr-embed-type><a href=#attr-embed-type>type</a></code> attribute.</li>
+
+   <li><p>The element has a <a href=#media-element>media element</a> ancestor.</li>
+
+   <li><p>The element has an ancestor <code><a href=#the-object-element>object</a></code> element that is <em>not</em> showing its
+   <a href=#fallback-content>fallback content</a>.</li>
+
+  </ul><p>An <code><a href=#the-embed-element>embed</a></code> element is said to be <dfn id=concept-embed-active title=concept-embed-active>potentially
   active</dfn> when the following conditions are all met simultaneously:</p>
 
   <ul class=brief><li>The element is <a href=#in-a-document title="in a document">in a <code>Document</code></a> or was <a href=#in-a-document title="in a document">in a <code>Document</code></a> the last time the <a href=#event-loop>event loop</a>

diff --git a/index b/index
@@ -290,7 +290,7 @@
   </script><body onload=init()>
   <header class="head with-buttons" id=head><p><a href=//www.whatwg.org/ class=logo><img width=101 src=/images/logo alt=WHATWG height=101></a></p>
    <hgroup><h1 class=allcaps>HTML</h1>
-    <h2 class="no-num no-toc">Living Standard &mdash; Last Updated 2 May 2014</h2>
+    <h2 class="no-num no-toc">Living Standard &mdash; Last Updated 3 May 2014</h2>
    </hgroup><div>
     <div>
      <a href=//whatwg.org/html><span><strong>Multipage Version</strong> <code>whatwg.org/html</code></span></a>
@@ -23542,14 +23542,18 @@ href="?audio"&gt;audio&lt;/a&gt; test instead.)&lt;/p&gt;</pre>
 
   <div class=impl>
 
-  <p>When the element is created with neither a <code title=attr-embed-src><a href=#attr-embed-src>src</a></code> attribute
-  nor a <code title=attr-embed-type><a href=#attr-embed-type>type</a></code> attribute, and when attributes are removed such
-  that neither attribute is present on the element anymore, and when the element has a <a href=#media-element>media
-  element</a> ancestor, and when the element has an ancestor <code><a href=#the-object-element>object</a></code> element that is
-  <em>not</em> showing its <a href=#fallback-content>fallback content</a>, any <a href=#plugin>plugin</a> instantiated for
-  the element must be removed, and the <code><a href=#the-embed-element>embed</a></code> element then represents nothing.</p>
+  <p>While any of the following conditions are occurring, any <a href=#plugin>plugin</a> instantiated for
+  the element must be removed, and the <code><a href=#the-embed-element>embed</a></code> element <a href=#represents>represents</a>
+  nothing:</p>
 
-  <p>An <code><a href=#the-embed-element>embed</a></code> element is said to be <dfn id=concept-embed-active title=concept-embed-active>potentially
+  <ul class=brief><li><p>The element has neither a <code title=attr-embed-src><a href=#attr-embed-src>src</a></code> attribute nor a <code title=attr-embed-type><a href=#attr-embed-type>type</a></code> attribute.</li>
+
+   <li><p>The element has a <a href=#media-element>media element</a> ancestor.</li>
+
+   <li><p>The element has an ancestor <code><a href=#the-object-element>object</a></code> element that is <em>not</em> showing its
+   <a href=#fallback-content>fallback content</a>.</li>
+
+  </ul><p>An <code><a href=#the-embed-element>embed</a></code> element is said to be <dfn id=concept-embed-active title=concept-embed-active>potentially
   active</dfn> when the following conditions are all met simultaneously:</p>
 
   <ul class=brief><li>The element is <a href=#in-a-document title="in a document">in a <code>Document</code></a> or was <a href=#in-a-document title="in a document">in a <code>Document</code></a> the last time the <a href=#event-loop>event loop</a>

diff --git a/source b/source
@@ -24807,12 +24807,21 @@ href="?audio">audio&lt;/a> test instead.)&lt;/p></pre>
 
   <div class="impl">
 
-  <p>When the element is created with neither a <code data-x="attr-embed-src">src</code> attribute
-  nor a <code data-x="attr-embed-type">type</code> attribute, and when attributes are removed such
-  that neither attribute is present on the element anymore, and when the element has a <span>media
-  element</span> ancestor, and when the element has an ancestor <code>object</code> element that is
-  <em>not</em> showing its <span>fallback content</span>, any <span>plugin</span> instantiated for
-  the element must be removed, and the <code>embed</code> element then represents nothing.</p>
+  <p>While any of the following conditions are occurring, any <span>plugin</span> instantiated for
+  the element must be removed, and the <code>embed</code> element <span>represents</span>
+  nothing:</p>
+
+  <ul class="brief">
+
+   <li><p>The element has neither a <code data-x="attr-embed-src">src</code> attribute nor a <code
+   data-x="attr-embed-type">type</code> attribute.</p></li>
+
+   <li><p>The element has a <span>media element</span> ancestor.</p></li>
+
+   <li><p>The element has an ancestor <code>object</code> element that is <em>not</em> showing its
+   <span>fallback content</span>.</p></li>
+
+  </ul>
 
   <p>An <code>embed</code> element is said to be <dfn data-x="concept-embed-active">potentially
   active</dfn> when the following conditions are all met simultaneously:</p>