[e] (0) Try to clarify this mess of a sentence.

Fixing https://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=15345 Affected topics: Web Workers git-svn-id: http://svn.whatwg.org/webapps@6960 340c8d12-0b0e-0410-8428-c7bf67bfef74
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@@ -75469,9 +75469,9 @@ <h4 id="the-worker's-lifetime"><span class=secno>9.2.4 </span>The worker's lifet
 
   <p>Whenever a <code><a href=#document>Document</a></code> <var title="">d</var> is <dfn id="add-a-document-to-the-worker's-documents" title="add a document to the worker's documents">added to the
   worker's <code>Document</code>s</dfn>, the user agent must, for each
-  worker in the list of <a href="#the-worker's-workers">the worker's workers</a> whose list
-  of <a href="#the-worker's-documents">the worker's <code>Document</code>s</a> does not contain
-  <var title="">d</var>, <a href="#add-a-document-to-the-worker's-documents" title="add a document to the worker's
+  worker <var title="">q</var> in the list of <a href="#the-worker's-workers">the worker's
+  workers</a> whose list of <a href="#the-worker's-documents">the worker's
+  <code>Document</code>s</a> does not contain <var title="">d</var>, <a href="#add-a-document-to-the-worker's-documents" title="add a document to the worker's
   documents">add <var title="">d</var> to <var title="">q</var>'s
   <code>WorkerGlobalScope</code> owner's list of <span>the worker's
   <code>Document</code>s</span></a>.</p> <!-- suggestions welcome

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@@ -75469,9 +75469,9 @@ interface <dfn id=workerglobalscope>WorkerGlobalScope</dfn> : <a href=#eventtarg
 
   <p>Whenever a <code><a href=#document>Document</a></code> <var title="">d</var> is <dfn id="add-a-document-to-the-worker's-documents" title="add a document to the worker's documents">added to the
   worker's <code>Document</code>s</dfn>, the user agent must, for each
-  worker in the list of <a href="#the-worker's-workers">the worker's workers</a> whose list
-  of <a href="#the-worker's-documents">the worker's <code>Document</code>s</a> does not contain
-  <var title="">d</var>, <a href="#add-a-document-to-the-worker's-documents" title="add a document to the worker's
+  worker <var title="">q</var> in the list of <a href="#the-worker's-workers">the worker's
+  workers</a> whose list of <a href="#the-worker's-documents">the worker's
+  <code>Document</code>s</a> does not contain <var title="">d</var>, <a href="#add-a-document-to-the-worker's-documents" title="add a document to the worker's
   documents">add <var title="">d</var> to <var title="">q</var>'s
   <code>WorkerGlobalScope</code> owner's list of <span>the worker's
   <code>Document</code>s</span></a>.</p> <!-- suggestions welcome

diff --git a/source b/source
@@ -87486,9 +87486,10 @@ interface <dfn>WorkerGlobalScope</dfn> : <span>EventTarget</span> {
   <p>Whenever a <code>Document</code> <var title="">d</var> is <dfn
   title="add a document to the worker's documents">added to the
   worker's <code>Document</code>s</dfn>, the user agent must, for each
-  worker in the list of <span>the worker's workers</span> whose list
-  of <span>the worker's <code>Document</code>s</span> does not contain
-  <var title="">d</var>, <span title="add a document to the worker's
+  worker <var title="">q</var> in the list of <span>the worker's
+  workers</span> whose list of <span>the worker's
+  <code>Document</code>s</span> does not contain <var
+  title="">d</var>, <span title="add a document to the worker's
   documents">add <var title="">d</var> to <var title="">q</var>'s
   <code>WorkerGlobalScope</code> owner's list of <span>the worker's
   <code>Document</code>s</span></span>.</p> <!-- suggestions welcome