[e] (0) Tweak some informative wording for clarity. (bug 6767)

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whatwg · Jun 1, 2009 · 65dc98c · 65dc98c
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@@ -15393,10 +15393,10 @@ this specification: the &lt;abbr&gt;WHATWG&lt;/abbr&gt; and the
    <p>For dates before the introduction of the Gregorian calendar,
    authors are encouraged to not use the <code><a href=#the-time-element>time</a></code> element, or
    else to be very careful about converting dates and times from the
-   period to the Gregorian calendar. This is complicated by the way
-   the Gregorian calendar was phased in at different times in
-   different countries, ranging from part way through the 16th century
-   all the way to early in the 20th.</p>
+   period to the Gregorian calendar. This is complicated by the manner
+   in which the Gregorian calendar was phased in, which occurred at
+   different times in different countries, ranging from partway
+   through the 16th century all the way to early in the 20th.</p>
 
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@@ -70706,6 +70706,7 @@ S SPACER STRIKE TT U -->
   Benjamin Hawkes-Lewis,
   Bert Bos,
   Bijan Parsia,
+  Bil Corry,
   Bill Mason,
   Bill McCoy,
   Billy Wong,

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@@ -16451,10 +16451,10 @@ this specification: the &lt;abbr>WHATWG&lt;/abbr> and the
    <p>For dates before the introduction of the Gregorian calendar,
    authors are encouraged to not use the <code>time</code> element, or
    else to be very careful about converting dates and times from the
-   period to the Gregorian calendar. This is complicated by the way
-   the Gregorian calendar was phased in at different times in
-   different countries, ranging from part way through the 16th century
-   all the way to early in the 20th.</p>
+   period to the Gregorian calendar. This is complicated by the manner
+   in which the Gregorian calendar was phased in, which occurred at
+   different times in different countries, ranging from partway
+   through the 16th century all the way to early in the 20th.</p>
 
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@@ -83367,6 +83367,7 @@ S SPACER STRIKE TT U -->
   Benjamin Hawkes-Lewis,
   Bert Bos,
   Bijan Parsia,
+  Bil Corry,
   Bill Mason,
   Bill McCoy,
   Billy Wong,